martes, 14 de octubre de 2008

Story by Vanessa Díaz

There she was standing alone in the middle of the street coming back from highschool. Her eyes seemed to be looking a man chasing her, she was very nervous, but actually, she didn't see anyone. When she arrived to her home, she felt relieved but worried because she didn't know what could happen the next day or if it was only her imagination and no one was chasing her. To take away this horrible thought she started chating with a boy that she had met throw the chat and only knew through the msn. She told the guy what had happened and how was day in highschool, she told him that she played in the highschool team of football. Then she asked with which number of t-shirt she played so she answer with the number two, and they continued chating a little bit more. After this conversation and many others before, the guy could gather enough information to go and meet her in reality, because he knew in which neighborhood she lived, to which highschool she went and with the number of her t-shirt, it was very easy to find her.
The next day in the football game the girl felt a very strange looking, somebody was staring at her, but she didn't get worried because she thought that it was only her imagination because she was paranoic. That night, when she was returning to her home like every day at the same hour, the guy was waiting for herin the forest that was on the way to her home.
Since that night the girl dissapeared and no one could fing her. But her parents, looking for information in her computer, found many conversations that the girl had with this guy. When the parents spoke to her friends about what they had discovered, they realised that all of them had chated with this guy, so they were in danger that this could happen again with some of her friends...

5 comentarios:

juana dijo...

vanesa:
I started reading your story with a teacher`s eye but I soon forgot all about grammar as I got so involved with your writing.
Your story is well told and scary too! Congrats and keep on writing.
I am an EFL teacher from Argentina and this is the first time I comment in a BLOG.
All the best ,
Juana

Mariana Porta dijo...

I agree with Juana!! What suspense!! I really like your writing style!

Marcelo Escobal dijo...

I'm ready for part II. Nice post.

Budoy dijo...

That's the end?

Great story btw.

Anónimo dijo...

Good job ... I really like it. I felt scared for a bit ! Sad end ... but unfortunatly is reality in so many cases.